Thursday, October 31, 2013

Creative response to Looking thru those Eyeholes by Russel Soaba

I wrote a poem in response to Looking thru Those Eyeholes by Russel Soaba. His poem I believe was about reconnecting with your culture/family and also about returning to your homeland. I chose to write my poem about my deceased father and how I feel lost without him.

The Grave



I once went to the grave of my
Father to see the grass and wild flowers
Had taken over and covered the writing which
Said “Here Lies Tane” etc. I waded through
The foliage only to feel myself sinking into the
Ground. I choked on the dirt and felt it fill my lungs,
When suddenly I stopped struggling and realised
I had fought so hard to reach my father and finally
I was beside him. And so I let myself drown in the
Earth and our bodies disintegrated and became food
For the flowers up above us.

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